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Persiapan sebelum mulai menulis manuskrip
• Mengapa perlu mempublikasikan hasil karya riset?
• Apakah sudah ada kontribusi ilmiah?
• Apakah sudah ada permasalahan yang berhasil dipecahkan?
• Apakah data yang dimiliki sudah bisa menyatakan perspektif ilmiah?
• Bagaimana hasil-hasil termutakhir pada bidang yang sama?
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Manuskrip yang baik
• Manuskrip yang baik bisa membuat pembaca mendapatkan informasi
saintifik yang dipaparkan dengan mudah dan jelas.
• Poin utama manuskrip yang baik
• Isi, menarik pembaca dan bernilai manfaat
• Penyajian, jelas dan logis
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Persiapan sebelum mulai menulis manuskrip
• Pemilihan jurnal yang tepat
• Lingkup dan tujuan dari jurnal yang dituju
• Tipe makalah yang telah berhasil dipublikasi
• Segmen pembaca
• Topik-topik teraktual
• Impact factor dari jurnal
• Memahami dengan jelas petunjuk penulisan jurnal bagi para penulis.
• Terapkan aturan penulisan jurnal bahkan sejak dari draft paling awal
• Format, layout, gambar, table, referensi, dsb.
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Format dari Jurnal
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Menulis manuskrip
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Judul Manuskrip
• Senjata untuk menarik perhatian pembaca
• Sesingkat mungkin tetapi informatif dan spesifik, tanpa
singkatan/akronim (kecuali yang sudah sangat dikenal umum)
• Gunakan frasa yang kemungkinan besar akan dipakai dalam
pencarian topik makalah
• Gunakan frasa yang menggambarkan distinctive features dari
makalah
• Hindari frasa yang terlalu umum
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Title
• Spesifik
• Learning Concept Drift (kurang spesifik)
• Relevant Data Expansion for Learning Concept Drift from Sparsely Labeled Data
(lebih spesifik untuk menggambarkan isi makalah)
• Distinctive Features
• Learning User Interest Dynamics with a Three-Descriptor Representations
• Kata Kunci
• Learning User Interest Dynamics with a Three-Descriptor Representation
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Authors
• Penulis adalah individu yang:
• Berkontribusi secara signifikan dalam penelitian yang ditulis di makalah
• Berkontribusi dalam membuat draft, mereview dan/atau merevisi substansi
makalah (bukan spell/grammar checking, typesetting)
• Memberikan persetujuan versi final makalah, termasuk daftar referensinya
• Urutan penulisan author (jika lebih dari satu) sangat bergantung pada:
• Kontribusi dalam pembuatan makalah
• Konteks budaya (kebiasaan lokal)
• Pada umumnya tidak mencantumkan gelar
• Daftar penulis biasanya disertai dengan informasi kontak yang terdiri
dari nama afiliasi dan e-mail (bukan alamat pos) Dwi H. Widyantoro, Penulisan Makalah Ilmiah
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Abstrak
• Menggambarkan keseluruhan isi manuskrip tanpa harus membaca keseluruhan.
• Abstrak berperan penting untuk mempengaruhi pembaca untuk melanjutkan
atau berhenti.
• Spesifik,ringkas, dan akurat
• Masalah yang diselesaikan
• Metode yang dipakai
• Hasil utama yang diperoleh
• Ditulis dalam satu paragraf
• Sekitar 200 kata
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Abstract
In this paper, a method to extract the parameters of Interior • Apa kelebihan yang ditawarkan oleh
Permanent Magnet Synchronous Motor (IPMSM) is makalah tsb?
presented by considering geometrical properties. This
method offers simple parameter estimation since • Bagaimana usulan yang ditawarkan
geometrical properties is readily available or easy to measure oleh makalah bisa/perlu untuk
from each design stage of IPMSM development. To verify the menyelesaikan suatu masalah?
parameters obtained from presented method, parameter
estimation by using Finite Element Analysis (FEA) tools is also • Bagaimana metode dan pedekatan
conducted by using the same geometrical properties. yang dilakukan sehingga bisa
Furthermore, the resulted IPMSM parameters from both
approaches are used for evaluating the motor performance.
menyelesaikan masalah?
Dynamic simulation model of IPMSM is constructed to test • Apa hasil utama yang diperoleh?
the parameters obtained from the calculation, while FEA
dynamic simulation is used to test the parameters which is
obtained from FEA itself. It can be shown that the presented
method gives good agreement result with the FEA.
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Keywords
• Hindari terlalu spesifik
• Atau terlalu umum
• Hindari singkatan tidak umum
• Ikuti petunjuk jurnal
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Introduction
• Berguna untuk meyakinkan pembaca bahwa penulis
memahami pekerjaan riset yang dilakukan adalah sesuatu
yang bermanfaat.
• Kondisi termutakhir bidang riset yang dilakukan
• Mengarah ke permasalahan yang dihadapi pada riset yang
dipaparkan
• Ekspektasi dari dilakukannya riset tersebut
• Pendekatan yang dipakai untuk menyelesaikan masalah
• Hasil yang sudah diperoleh
• Overview apa yang akan di sampaikan dalam makalah
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Introduction
Successful market penetration of mobile-gadget, for example smart-phone and tablet devices, has driven
enormous growth of data-traffic internet. Several facts confirm this situation: global mobile data grew
69% in a single year from 1.5 exabytes per month in 2013 to 2.5 exabytes per month in 2014; average
smart-phone monthly mobile data traffic grew 45% from 536 Megabytes (MB) in 2013 to 819 MB in 2014; Konteks umum terkait
average monthly mobile data traffic for laptop was 2600 MB, in comparison, average monthly mobile data penelitian yang dilakukan
traffic for mobile-connected tablet was 2076 MB[1]. To put into another perspective, mobile data traffic in
2014 only was nearly 30 times of the size of entire internet network back in year 2000, moreover, the
number of mobile-connected devices exceeded the the world’s population in 2014[1].
In Indonesia, total number subscriber of top three operator has reached approximately 250 million
subscriber in cumulative. This number is almost similar with the number of population in Indonesia.
Looking more into details, the density for fixed-line and mobile connection are 15.9% and 97.7%,
respectively. While the density of fixed and mobile broadband are 1.1% and 22.2%, respectively[2]. Such
big number of market also has significant number of mobile data broadband user. Therefore, The
Government of Indonesia has put special attention to the development of broadband in Indonesia[2][3].
The targets to be achieved by 2019 are, for cities, broadband access infrastructure reaches the Konteks khusus terkait
penetration level of 30% from the total population, 71% from the total households with speed of 20 penelitian yang dilakukan
Megabytes per second (Mbps), 10% from total office buildings with speed of 1 Gbps. While in the rural
areas, broadband access infrastructure reaches the penetration level of 6% from the total population,
49% from the total households with speed of 10 Mbps[3]. Another target to be achieved in 2019 is that
the service fee should be maximum 5% of the montly average income per capita[3]. These data and
targets shows that broadband growth has become main interest from the regulator and provider point of
view due to massive prospective demand today.
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Introductions
In order to fulfil the broadband demand, the provider should prepare some infrastructures
which able to accomodate the broadband growth in Indonesia. However, some additional (Problem Outline)
infrastructures mean additional costly investment. Over-planning will burden the provider Permasalahan yang
financially, while lack of planning will reduce the opportunities and revenues. Therefore,
dihadapi dan perlunya
accurate broadband user forecasting is needed to obtain accurate estimation of the growth of
user, which will have consequence in the cost of investment that has to be prepared by the penelitian dilakukan
provided.
Broadband forecasting method for predicting growth has been presented by several authors.
Bellcore Data Market Demand Model (BDMDM) was used to do forecast aggregation while
Broadband Internode Forecasting Tools (BIFT) was used to do forecast disaggregation in [4]. (Related Works)
Multi-faceted approach was used to forecast by considering statistical and historical analysis Studi literatur tentang
in [5]. Analytical method based on quantitative series forecasting was developed in [6] to
forecast with considering quantitative factor of telecommunication service life-cycle. perkembangan yang sudah
Gompertz function-based S-curve was used to forecast the mobile broadband traffic in [7]. dilakukan, dan
Compound annual growth rate (CAGR) based forecasting is presented in [8]. Although those kelemahannnya
methods provide good accuracy, however, some of them are using relatively many
parameters which may be difficult to obtain for forecasting broadband demand user.
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Introductions
In this paper, broadband demand forecasting for Indonesia is presented in simpler way by using fourier
analysis. By using this approach, the historical data of broadband demand is considered as time-series
data. Some common methods for time-series forecasting techniques are the autoregressive (AR), the
moving average (MA), and its derivative combinations such as Auto Regressive Moving Average (ARMA),
and Auto Regressive Integrated Moving Average (ARIMA)[9]. These techniques analyses time-series data (Proposal)
under assumptions that the underlying stochastic process is stationary[10]. Other time series method is
Generalized Auto Regressive Conditional Heteroskedasticity (GARCH) which is the generalized form of
Usulan solusi yang
Exponentially Weighted Moving Average (EWMA) model[9]. Fourier analysis is considered as spectral ditawarkan, sedikit hasil
analysis, alongside with wavelet analysis. These techniques is powerful to asses the anomalies in time of a yang diperoleh bila
time-series data[10]. For example, to predict regular repetitive characteristic of a time-series data.
Accurate modeling of a certain time-series waveform function by Fourier analysis approach can be diperlukan
extended to predict the future outcome. Fourier-based forecasting has been applied for several time-
series condition, for example in market demands [11][12], electrical peak load [13], stock market [14][15],
and many more. As far as the authors concern, broadband demand forecasting based on fourier analysis in
Indonesia has not been found in any literature.
(Paper Organization)
Isi bagian-bagian utama
This paper is organized as follows, in Section II the basic knowledge of Fourier analysis is presented, then
the forecasting method based on Fourier analysis is discussed. In Section III, the presented forecasting
model based on Fourier analysis is confirmed its validity by using hypotethical data of daily price dari paper
fluctuation for time interval of one and quarter year. Section IV presents the broadband user demand
forecasting in Indonesia by using presented forecasting model. Several cases of fixed and mobile
broadband forecasting is presented in this section. Section V will conclude this paper.
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Research Method
• Proses dan langkah-langkah bagaimana permasalahan riset dipelajari.
• Runtut dan detil, sehingga bisa dipahami dan diulangi oleh pembaca yang
tertarik.
• Perlu ditunjang dengan referensi yang kuat, untuk menunjukkan metode-
metode yang telah dilakukan sebelumnya.
Poor writing style:
First, I removed the frog muscle and then I poured Ringer’s solution on it. Next, I attached it to
the kymograph
Better writing style:

I removed the frog muscle and poured Ringer’s solution on it to prevent it from drying out. I then
attached the muscle to the kymograph in order to determine the minimum voltage required for
contraction.
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Results
• Hasil adalah data-data yang berhasil diproduksi dari riset yang
dilakukan
• Pemaparan yang jelas dan mudah dipahami
• Tunjukkan hasil yang merepresentasikan tujuan dari manuskrip yang dibuat
• Ditunjang dengan grafik, gambar, dsb.
• Simbol grafik jelas dan mudah dibaca
• Skala
• Tidak perlu menampilkan tabel yang terlalu panjang
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Results
• Penjelasan temuan
utama yang dapat
disimpulkan dari
tabel /grafik.
• Semua tabel Dukungan
/grafik /gambar gambar/grafik
diberi nomor &
captions serta harus
dirujuk minimal
sekali dalam teks.
• Semua informasi
dalam tabel
/grafik /gambar
harus terbaca jelas.
Dukungan
Tabel

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Results
Irr (W/m2) Z (Ω) Vopp (V) Vpv(V) Iopp (A) Ipv (A)
100 1150 241.85 260.1 0.580 0.503
200 540 257.45 263.3 1.165 1.133
400 260 270.14 266.8 2.335 2.360
600 170 275.07 268 3.499 3.566
800 125 276.43 269.9 4.655 4.719
1000 100 277.12 272.1 5.797 5.817
Perbandingan penyajian hasil

dengan tabel dan grafik
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Discussion
• Intepretasi dari data-data yang dihasilkan
• Diskusi adalah bagian untuk mengintepretasikan data, bukan mengulangi
bagian Hasil
• Berdasarkan data yang dihasilkan, penulis bisa memaparkan perspektif personal
dari permasalahan riset yang dihadapinya
• Pemaparan yang spesifik
• Hindari munculnya ide baru, sudah dipaparkan di Pendahuluan dan Metode
• Justifikasi dan logika
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The resuts are given in Figure 1.
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Temperature was directly proportional to metabolic rate as shown in Fig. 1.
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Discussion
The MPPT based on P&O algorithm employed
in the PV system provides several good results.
Fig. 6 shows the relation of the optimal voltage
(Vopt) and the PV voltage (Vpv) obtained from
the simulation. It can be seen that the MPPT
works well under the range of MPPT voltage in
the grey area. Similar results are also found in Fig. 6. Output voltage of PV under MPPT
the current, the optimal current (Iopt) and PV

current (Ipv) shows good accordance, as shown
in Fig. 7
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Fig. 7. Output current of PV under MPPT
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Conclusions
• Menunjukkan justifikasi saintifik yang jelas dari riset yang telah
dilakukan
• Apa yang telah dilakukan
• Apa kontribusi untuk bidang riset tersebut
• Kemungkinan pengembangan dan aplikasi ke depan
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Conclusions
In this paper, modeling of 1.6 kWp PV system • Apa yang telah dilakukan
in EECRL has been conducted. Simulation • Apa kontribusi untuk bidang
results verify the proposed model works well
riset tersebut
part by part. Comparison with actual 1.6 kWp
PV system results show that the proposed • Kemungkinan
model has good accordance with the actual pengembangan dan aplikasi
results. Slight improvement should be made ke depan
in selected MPPT algorithm the case that the
actual voltage tend to drop during high
power level, while the model gives the higher
voltage during the same power level.
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Acknowledgements
• Pemberitahuan tentang sponsor
• Ucapan terima kasih pada kolega (bukan anggota peneliti)
yang pernah diajak berdiskusi, termasuk yang membantu
proofread makalah
• Ucapan terima kasih kepada (anonymous) reviewers yang
memberikan saran-sarang yang konstruktif
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Acknowledgements
The authors would like to thank Xiang Gao, In spring 2004, Emmanuel Candès told the present
doctoral student at Lund University, for her author about his ideas for using the partial Fourier
analysis of the channel measurements ensemble in “undersampled imaging”; some of these
presented in Fig. 6 and Fig. 7, and the were published in [13]; see also the presentation [14].
Swedish organizations ELLIIT, VR, and SSF for More recently, Candès informed the present author of
their funding of parts of this work. the results in [47] referred to above. It is a pleasure to
acknowledge the inspiring nature of these
conversations. The author would also like to thank
The authors thank Arunabha Ghosh (AT&T
Anna Gilbert for telling him about her work [12] finding
Labs), Robert W. Heath, Jr. (UT Austin), and
the B-best Fourier coefficients by nonadaptive
Federico Boccardi (Vodafone) for very helpful sampling, and to thank Emmanuel Candès for
feedback and suggestions on the paper. conversations clarifying Gilbert’s work. Thanks to the
referees for numerous suggestions which helped to
clarify the exposition and argumentation. Anna Gilbert
offered helpful pointers to the data stream processing
literature.
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Referensi dan Sitasi
• Sumber literatur yang dijadikan dasar penelitian
• Bagian yang rawan bermasalah
• Hanya kutip publikasi-publikasi utama yang menjadi dasar riset yang dilakukan
• Tidak perlu terlalu berlebihan menuliskan referensi
• Hindari sitasi-sendiri yang terlalu banyak
• Variasi literatur
• Gunakan paper reference manager software
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Referensi
• MLA style (Humanities)
• Doggart, Julia. "Minding the Gap: Realizing Our Ideal Community Writing Assistance
Program." The Community Literacy Journal 2.1 (2007): 71-80. Print.
• APA style (Education, Psychology, Sciences)
• Alibali, M. W. (1999). How children change their minds: Strategy change can be
gradual or abrupt. Developmental Psychology, 35,127-145.
• Chicago style (Business, History, Fine Arts)
• Weinstein, Joshua I. "The Market in Plato’s Republic." Classical Philology 104 (2009):
439–58.
• IEEE (Engineering)
• [4] J. U. Duncombe, "Infrared navigation - Part I: An assessment of feasability," IEEE
Trans. Electron. Devices, vol. ED-11, pp. 34-39, Jan. 1959.
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Sitasi
Broadband forecasting method for predicting growth While the word length effect is robust, its
has been presented by several authors. Bellcore Data interpretation remains somewhat controversial.
Market Demand Model (BDMDM) was used to do There is no doubt that some of the effect occurs
forecast aggregation while Broadband Internode
because long words take longer to recall, leading
Forecasting Tools (BIFT) was used to do forecast
disaggregation in [4]. Multi-faceted approach was used
to more forgetting (Cowan et al., 1992). Indeed, it
to forecast by considering statistical and historical has been suggested that this may be the only
analysis in [5]. Analytical method based on quantitative factor (Dosher & Ma, 1998). However, the fact
series forecasting was developed in [6] to forecast with that a word length effect occurs when output
considering quantitative factor of telecommunication delay is held constant, either by using a probe
service life-cycle. Gompertz function-based S-curve was procedure (Henry, 1991), or by recognition
used to forecast the mobile broadband traffic in [7]. (Baddeley, Chincotta, Stafford, & Turk, 2002),
Compound annual growth rate (CAGR) based indicates that the effect operates at both the on-
forecasting is presented in [8]. Although those methods
going rehearsal level and through forgetting
provide good accuracy, however, some of them are
using relatively many parameters which may be difficult
during responding.
to obtain for forecasting broadband demand user.
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Aspek Lain Penulisan Manuskrip
• Panjang atau jumlah halaman manuskrip
• Data atau materi suplemen
• Layout dan format
• Singkatan
• Bahasa
• Aturan yang ditetapkan oleh jurnal/conference
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Aspek Lain Penulisan Manuskrip
• Bahasa
• Kaidah bahasa, grammar
• Gaya penulisan
• Singkat
• Jelas
• Obyektif
• Hindari kata-kata bersayap
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