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Judul Artikel : THE IMPACT OF THE COVID-19 PANDEMIC ON TOURISM

SECTOR IN INDONESIA USING A STRUCTURAL PATH
ANALYSIS BASED ON INTERREGIONAL INPUT-OUTPUT
MATRIX
Anggota : 1. Armiliyana Putri Salsabillah 191810101040
2. Dyah Ayu Fitriana 191810101090
3. Rosa Fernanda Prihartanti 191810101108
4. Kavin Irsyadul Insani 191810101113

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Anggota 1 Anggota 2 Anggota 3 Anggota 4

Armiliyana Putri Dyah Ayu Fitriana Rosa Fernanda Kavin Irsyadul

Salsabillah 191810101090 Prihartanti Insani
191810101040 191810101108 191810101113
 Form Penilaian Naskah dari sisi Bahasa dan Ilustrasi
Judul Naskah : THE IMPACT OF THE COVID-19 PANDEMIC ON TOURISM SECTOR IN INDONESIA USING A
STRUCTURAL PATH ANALYSIS BASED ON INTERREGIONAL INPUT-OUTPUT MATRIX
Penulis : Habi Cahya Kumara1,* , Dedy Prastyo2 , Santi Rahayu2
Tempat Publikasi : Jurnal Matematika dan Pendidikan Matematika (journal of mathematics and mathematics education)
Nama Kelompok dan Anggota :
1. Armiliyana Putri Salsabillah 191810101040
2. Dyah Ayu Fitriana 191810101090
3. Rosa Fernanda Prihartanti 191810101108
4. Kavin Irsyadul Insani 191810101113

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Grafik tepat, yaitu di tengah
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tepat, yaitu menggunakan sentence
case tanpa tanda baca titik (.)
Legenda √ Tidak ada keterangan/label pada
sumbu 𝑥 dan 𝑦, sehingga grafik tidak
bisa dibaca dengan jelas, meskipun
ada bantuan warna
Label Absis √ Tidak terdapat label pada absis dan
ordinat
Jelas/ Tidak √ - Grafik cukup jelas, namun label
pada sumbu x seharusnya tegak saja
(tidak miring kanan)
Dirujuk/ tidak √ - Terdapat rujukan sebelum grafik
2 Ilustrasi Judul Tabel √ - Judul tabel dengan satu baris
Tabel diletakkan di tengah
- Penulisan judul menggunakan
sentence case tanpa tanda baca titik
(.)
Garis pemisah √ - Seluruh tabel pada jurnal masih
menggunakan garis pemisah vertical
(seharusnya tidak perlu) pada isian
tabel
Penulisan angka √ - Pada tabel 1, bagian kolom IBL
dan IFL penulisan angka nya
tidak lurus (dapat dilihat dari
letak tanda koma pada setiap
kolom)
- Pada tabel 3 dan 4, bagian kolom
persen, letak penggunaan koma
tidak lurus
- Pada tabel 7, bagian SE Coef,
penulisan angka tidak rata tengah
, hal ini dianggap tidak konsisten
- Tabel 8, tidak konsisten dalam
peletakkan angka pada setiap
kolom, seharusnya rata kiri
 semua, serta letak penggunaan
koma tidak lurus
- Pada tabel 9, bagian Trilion
Rupiah, letak penggunaan koma
tidak lurus
- Penggunaan tanda titik dan koma
tidak konsisten, pada keseluruhan
tabel pada jurnal.
Dirujuk/tidak √ - Pada tabel 1, 3, dan 6 tidak terdapat
perujukan
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harusnya dipindah di halaman baru
agar tidak terpotong
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halaman
3 Lain-lain 1. Penggunaan bahasa: kelengkapan
kalimat dari sisi SP(OK), istilah
baku, penggunaan tanda baca;
2. Penggunaan notasi matematika
dan notasi ilmiah: penggunaan
tanda desimal (titik atau koma?)
dalam naskah bahasa Indonesia/
Bahasa Inggris
3. Struktur tulisan: mengikuti
kaidah jurnal (tidak sekedar copy-
paste naskah TA)
4. Penulisan daftar pustaka
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kaidah SPOK
 Beberapa kalimat tidak efektif dan
terkesan terlalu panjang
√ - Tidak konsisten dalam penggunaan
tanda decimal, dimana ada yang
pakai titik atau koma
- Penggunaan equation untuk notasi
matematika dalam rumus sudah
benar
√  Tidak ada indikasi copy paste
√  Tidak urut sesuai abjad
Penilaian Detail Artikel
No Posisi (halaman: alinea:baris) Tertulis
13 : 2 : 1 At the end of 2019 the world was shocked
by the new emerging infectious disease in
China; the Coronavirus disease (Covid-19).
1
13 : 2 : 5 This restriction resulted in a significant
reduction in economic demand
2 Perbaikan :
13 : 2 : 5 Based on the release of economic growth
data by BPS, Indonesia experienced a
recession in the third quarter of 2020 with
3 the transportation and tourism sectors being
the sectors most affected by this
pandemic.,
Komentar/ Perbaikan
Komentar :
 Tidak sesuai dengan
kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
 Kata “in” kurang efektif
digunakan pada kalimat
Perbaikan :
The world was shocked by the new
emerging infectious disease from
China, called Coronavirus disease
(Covid-19) in the late 2019.
Komentar :
 Kata “demand” kurang efektif
This restriction resulted in a significant
reduction in economic activity
Komentar :
 Tidak sesuai dengan
kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
Perbaikan :
BPS released data on economic growth
during the pandemic, where in data it
was mentioned that Indonesia

13 : 2 : 11 According to the results of the analysis up to Komentar :
October 2020, Indonesia
lost potential income in the tourism sector
by 165.97 trillion rupiah
4
13 : 2 : 15 Regionally, the province of Bali and DI
Yogyakarta became the provinces with the
biggest impact from the decline in tourism
due to the composition of the tourism sector
in it’s regional economy is equal to 34,8%
5 and 26,5%
experienced a recession in the third
quarter of 2020 with the transportation
and tourism sectors being the sectors
most affected by this
pandemic.,
 Tidak sesuai dengan
kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
Perbaikan :
the results of the analysis up to October
2020 said that , Indonesia
lost potential income in the tourism sector
by 165.97 trillion rupiah
Komentar :
 Tidak sesuai dengan
kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
 Tidak perlu “regionally”
Perbaikan :
the province of Bali and DI Yogyakarta
became the provinces with the biggest
impact from the decline in tourism due
to the composition of the tourism sector in
it’s regional economy is equal to 34,8%
and 26,5%
 14 : 1 : 2 After appearing in China, the pandemic Komentar :
spread rapidly to 210 countries including  Tidak sesuai dengan
Indonesia kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
6 Perbaikan :
the pandemic spread rapidly to 210
countries (including Indonesia), after
appearing in China
14 : 2 : 3 Meanwhile, the spread of Covid-19 around Komentar :
the world reached 54.63 million, of which  Tidak sesuai dengan
1.32 million people died kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
 Tidak perlu kata penghubung
pada awal kalimat
7
Perbaikan :
The spread of Covid-19 around the
world reached 54.63 million, of which
1.32 million
people died
14 : 3 : 1 The impact of the pandemic on the tourism Komentar :
industry was very pronounced; there was a  Kalimat kurang efektif dan
significant decrease in the number of penggunaan tanda baca titik
8 foreign tourists visiting Indonesia koma kurang tepat
Perbaikan :
The impact of the pandemic on the
tourism industry was very pronounced,

14 : 3 : 2 Based on data from the Central Statistics
Agency (BPS), until September 2020 the
number of foreign tourists to Indonesia had
decreased by 88.95% compared to the same Perbaikan :
month in 2019.
9
14 : 3 : 4 Cumulatively (January-September 2020),
the number of foreign tourist visits to
Indonesia reached 3.56 million, or decreased
70.57% compared to the same
period in 2019 which amounted to 12.10
10 million.
one of which is the drastic decline in the
number of foreign tourists visiting
Indonesia
Komentar :
 Tidak sesuai dengan
kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
data from the Central Statistics
Agency (BPS) said that, until September
2020 the number of foreign tourists to
Indonesia had decreased by
88.95% compared to the same month in
2019
Komentar :
 Tidak sesuai dengan
kaidah/syarat kelengkapan SPOK
Perbaikan :
Cumulative data in January-September
2020, mentioned that), the number of
foreign tourist visits to Indonesia reached
3.56 million, or decreased 70.57%
compared to the same
period in 2019 which amounted to 12.10
million.
 14 : 4 : 1 Tourism supporting sectors such as hotels,
restaurants, and retail entrepreneurs have
also felt the impact of Covid-19; based on
BPS data, the Room Occupancy Rate (TPK)
of star-classified hotels in Indonesia in
September 2020 reached an average of
32.12 percent, or decreased by 21.40 points
compared to the TPK in the same month in
2019, which recorded 53.52 percent
11
15 : 3 : 6 It can also explain the leading sector and the
12 impact between other sectors.
Komentar :
 Kalimat tidak dapat dijadikan
hanya satu paragraph, karena
minim ada 4-5 kalimat dalam
satu paragraph, sehingga perlu
digabung dengan paragraph
sebelumnya
 Penggunaan tanda baca titik
koma kurang tepat
Perbaikan :
Tourism supporting sectors such as
hotels, restaurants, and retail
entrepreneurs have also felt the
impact of Covid-19, which BPS’s data
said that the Room Occupancy Rate
(TPK) of star-classified hotels in
Indonesia in September 2020 reached an
average of 32.12 percent, or decreased
by 21.40 points
compared to the TPK in the same month
in 2019, which recorded 53.52 percent
Komentar : Kata “juga” sebaiknya
jangan ditempatkan pada awal kalimat
Perbaikan :
 Kata “juga” sebaiknya diganti dengan
kalimat Analisis Input-Output, menjadi
Input-Output analysis it also can explain
the leading sector and the impact
between other sectors.
16: 5 : 8 The use of SPA has only been applied Komentar :
statically—often for extracting the main Tidak perlu menggunakan garis
upstream impacts of products or penghubung pada kalimat tersebut.
Perbaikan :
organisations.
13 The use of SPA has only been applied
statically for extracting the main
upstream impacts of products or
organisations.

17 : 3 : 4
3. Calculated the distribution power index
and sensitivity degree index for all sectors
and regions in Indonesia.
14
Komentar :
Tanda titik pada akhir kalimat perincian
salah
Perbaikan :
Seharusnya pada akhir kalimat perincian
menggunakan tanda titik koma
3. Calculated the distribution power
index and sensitivity degree index for all
sectors and regions in Indonesia;

17-18 : 3 : 25 Komentar :
15 9. ARIMA modeling with pre-intervention data Tanda titik pada akhir kalimat perincian
(n = 120). salah
 Perbaikan :
10. ARIMA Model evaluation before Seharusnya pada akhir kalimat perincian
intervention based on the smallest MSE value. menggunakan tanda titik koma bukan
11. Forecast for data after the intervention (as tanda titik
much as n = 10) using the ARIMA model before 9. ARIMA modeling with pre-intervention
intervention. data (n = 120);

10. ARIMA Model evaluation before

intervention based on the smallest MSE
value;
11. Forecast for data after the intervention
(as much as n = 10) using the ARIMA model
before intervention;

18 : 2 : 1 Komentar :
One of the advantages of the I-O model Tidak perlu menggunakan kalimat “salah
analysis is that it can be used to determine satu”
the extent of the relationship between Perbaikan :
16 Advantages of the I-O model analysis is
production sectors.
that it can be used to determine the
extent of the relationship between
production sectors.
15 : 3 : 4 The Input Output table shows output Komentar :
structure, value added, intermediate - Kata Input Output tidak
17 consumption, supply and demand between menggunakan kata penghubung
- Setelah kata “supply” tidak
sectors.
menggunakan tanda koma
 Perbaikan :
The Input-Output table shows output
structure, value added, intermediate
consumption, supply, and demand
between sectors.
20 : 1 : 3 To be able to explain further the results of the Comment :
backward linkage and forward linkage  Use conjunctions at the beginning
indexes, the sectorial linkages in a region of sentences
need to be broken down to be compared with
18 the tourism sector linkages in provinces Repair : In order to further explain the
whose tourism sector has a large contribution results, sectoral linkages in a region need
value to be detailed to compare with the
linkages of the tourism sector in
provinces where the tourism sector has a
large contribution value
20 : 2 : 1 Table 2 shows that the output multiplier Comment :
related to the tourism sector with the largest  Sentence too long
value is the Hotel and Restaurant sector, i.e.  It's best to make two sentences
1.7664, which means that for each one-unit
increase in output (million rupiah) in the Repair : Table 2 shows that the output
19
Hotel and Restaurant sector, the sector is able multiplier related to the tourism sector
to create additional output of 1.756 in the with the largest value is the Hotel and
national economy, which means that each Restaurant sector, i.e. 1.7664. Each one-
additional of IDR 1 million in the Hotel and unit increase in output (million rupiah) in
Restaurant sector is able to create additional the Hotel and Restaurant sector, the
 output of IDR 1.76 million in the national sector is able to create additional output
economy of 1.756 in the national economy, which
means that each additional of IDR 1
million in the Hotel and Restaurant
sector is able to create additional output
of IDR 1.76 million in the national
economy
22 : 2 : 1 By looking at the relationship between Comment :
sectors in the IRIO table and tourism-related  Use conjunctions at the beginning
sectors, we can find out which sectors are of sentences
related and have a major influence on the
tourism sector in Indonesia, which in this Repair : The relationship between sectors
20 case are the Food and Beverage sector and in the IRIO table and sectors related to
the Trade sector tourism, it can be seen which sectors are
related and have an influence on the
tourism sector in Indonesia, which in this
case is the Food and Beverage sector and
the Trade sector
24 : 1 : 2 From the results of the SPA in the four Comment :
sectors related to the tourism sector, there are  Use conjunctions at the beginning
2 sectors that have the highest influence on of sentences
21 the tourism sector, namely the Food and
Beverage Industry and the Trade sector Repair : The results of the SPA in the
four sectors related to the tourism sector,
there are 2 sectors that have the highest
 influence on the tourism sector, namely
the Food and Beverage Industry and the
Trade sector
25 : 1 : 1 Figure 1. Time Series Plot of Foreign Tourist Setelah judul gambar diberi sumber
22
by Month in Indonesia gambar di dalam tanda kurung.
25 : 3 : 1 Table 7. Parameter Estimate of ARIMA - Garis vertikal hanya ditampilkan apabila

(2,1,0)(0,0,2)12 sangat diperlukan dalam tabel

23 Penulisan notasi matematika dalam
decimal tidak konsisten seharusnya
ditulis dengan tanda titik
26 : 1 : 1 Table 8. Forecast Result of Foreign Tourist - Garis vertikal hanya ditampilkan apabila
Visit in Indonesia with sangat diperlukan dalam tabel
24 12 Penulisan notasi matematika dalam
ARIMA(2,1,0)(0,0,2) Models
decimal tidak konsisten seharusnya
ditulis dengan tanda titik
26 : 3 : 1 Table 9. Convertion Result of Tourist Garis vertikal hanya ditampilkan apabila
25
Expenditure in IRIO Sectors sangat diperlukan dalam tabel