“PLACING ORDER”
A. Opening Paragraph
Make it clear that there is an order accompanying the letter. (Jelaskan bahwa ada perintah
yang menyertai surat tersebut.)
Examples:
1. Please find enclosed our Order No. B452i for 25 clearsounded transistor receivers.
2. Would you please ship the following item in your brochure dated…
3. The enclosed order (No. 8154) is for 50 packets of A4 copier paper.
4. Thank you for your reply of 14 May regarding our email about the mobile phones. Enclosed
you will find our official order (No. 13561) for...
5. I would like to place a trial order for the 'Letherine' material we discussed at the trade show last
month. Please find enclosed ...
B. Message Paragraph
Confirm a detailed list of product that you want to order (Konfirmasikan daftar detail produk
yang ingin dipesan)
a. No. (number) (nomor)
b. Unit price (harga peruntit)
c. Description/ items (barang)
d. Amount (Jumlah)
e. Quantity (jumlah banyak
f. Delivery date (tanggal pengiriman)
g. Type (jenis)
h. Terms of payment (cara pembayaran)
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Confirm the agreed discounts. (Konfirmasi diskon yang ditentukan)
Examples:
1. We would like to thank you for the 30% trade discount and 10% quantity discount you
allowed us.
2. Finally, we would like to confirm that the 25% trade discount is quite satisfactory
3. ... and we will certainly take advantage of the cash discounts you offered for prompt
settlement.
4. Although we anticipated a higher trade discount than 15%, we will place an initial order and
hope that the discount can be reviewed in the nearfuture.
Confirm the shipping method used for delivery (Konfirmasi metode pengiriman yang digunakan)
Many companies use forwarding agents who are specialists in packing to ship goods.
Nevertheless, to ensure prompt and safe delivery, it is a good idea to advise the company on how
we want the goods packed and sent. This means that if the consignment arrives late, or in a
damaged state, our letter is evidence of the instructions we gave. (Banyak perusahaan menggunakan
agen ekspedisi yang ahli dalam mengemas untuk mengirimkan barang. Meski demikian, untuk
memastikan pengiriman yang cepat dan aman, sebaiknya beri tahu perusahaan tentang bagaimana
kita ingin barang dikemas dan dikirim. Artinya jika kiriman datang terlambat, atau dalam keadaan
rusak, surat yang kita buat merupakan bukti atas instruksi yang kita berikan.)
Examples:
1. ... and please remember that only airfreight will ensure prompt delivery
2. Please send the goods by express freight as we need them urgently
3. We advise delivery by road to avoid constant handling of this fragile consignment.
4. Could you please ship by scheduled freighter to avoid any unnecessary delays?
Confirm the packing of goods for deliver (konfirmasikan pengemasan barang untuk pengiriman)
Advise the seller how we want the goods packed. For examples marked with a fragile goods
sign that can be recognized by the seller and customer. (Beritahu penjual bagaimana kita ingin
barangnya dikemas. Contohnya seperti diberi tanda bahwa barang pecah belah yang dapat dikenali
penjual dan pembeli).
Examples:
1. Each piece of crockery is to be individually wrapped in thick paper, packed in straw, and
shipped in wooden crates marked 0 and numbered I to 6.
2. The carpets should be wrapped, and the packaging reinforced at both ends to avoid wear.
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3. The machines must be well greased with all movable parts secured before being loaded into
crates, which should be clearly marked with your castle logo for easy identification.
C. Closing Paragraph
This like the first section, is usually a short paragraph. A simple thank you for the recipients
attention, response, or attention is enough to close the letter.
Examples:
1. We hope that this will be the first of many orders we place with you.
2. We should be grateful for your prompt delivery as the goods are urgently needed
3. We will place further orders if this one is completed to our satisfaction.
4. If our sales targets are met, we shall be placing further orders in the nearfuture.
5. I look forward to receiving your advice / shipment / acknowledgement / confirmation.
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Example of covering Letter:
Telephone: +44(0)212366571
Fax: +44(0)212368592
Email: pcrane@lynch.co.uk
www.lynch.com
9 March 20—
Satex S.p.A
Via di Pietra Papa
00146 Roma
ITALY
Attn.Sig.D.Causio
Dear Sig.Causio
For this order, we accept the 15% trade discount you offered, and the terms
of payment (sight draf, CAD), but hope you are willing to review these
terms if we decide to order again.
Would you please and the shipping documents and your sight draft to
Northminster Bank (City Branch), Deal Street, Birmingham B3 ISQ
If you do not have any of the items we have ordered currently in stock,
please do not send alternatives.
We would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward
to your acknowledgement.
Yours sincerely
Peter Crane
Peter Crane
Chief Buyer
Enc.Order No. DR4316
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Example of order letter without official order form:
From,
The Principal
Modern School
Raj Nagar Extension
Email: xyzyu@gmail.com,
Mobile No. 8797002456
Dear Sir/Ma’am
I am writing to you to place an order for furniture for our school library. We are renovating our school in the next
month. Therefore, I request you to please note down my order for the same:
Material Quantity
Chairs 50
The furniture must be subtle. Please deliver the order by 8th February 2020. Payment will be released after approval
by the teachers’ committee.
Yours faithfully
Kumar Nath
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4. CONCLUSION
We can place an order by sending an order letter, order letter can be make with an official
order form (accompanied by a covering letter) or without official order form. When we make an
order letter make sure that our letter contains detailed information about goods or services that we
want to order and straight to the point, and don’t forget to confirm term of payment, any allowed
discount, delivery dates, shipping method, and packing method.
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References:
Ashley, A. 1984. A Handbook of Commercial Correspondence. Oxford University Press.
https://desiagstn.blogspot.com/2015/06/pengertian-dan-contoh-order-letter.html
http://mayangadi.blogspot.com/2012/11/order-letter-surat-pemesanan.html
https://bestlettertemplate.com/letter-for-placing-order/
http://inamona92.blogspot.com/2013/01/order-letterplacing-order.html