Observation on …
Study on …
Investigation of …
An opening ‘A’, ‘An’, ‘The’
Penelitian tentang …., etc
Tempat dan Waktu Penelitian
• Results of new antiepileptic drug in patients with
temporal lobe epilepsy in Cipto Mangunkusumo
Hospital, Jakarta
• Results of bone marrow transplantation in children with
leukemia in Dr. Sutomo Hospital, Surabaya, 2000-2007
• Comment:
- Do not include time and place when the results are
supposed to be inferred and applied in a larger
population. Appropriate when the results are applied to
the specified location and cannot be inferred into the
larger population
Kesalahan
1
Departemen Parasitologi, Fakultas Kedokteran
Universitas Indonesia, Jakarta
2
Departemen Patologi Klinik, Fakultas Kedokteran
Universitas Indonesia, Jakarta
Abstrak
Laki 29 40 69 42%
Perempuan 14 32 46 43%
Format tabel yang salah
Variabel Positif Negatif Jumlah Prevalensi
Usia 6-12 22 16 38 58%
tahun
Usia 13-15 21 56 77 27%
tahun
Laki 29 40 69 42%
Perempuan 14 32 46 43%
Example: Unnecessary table
Our series consisted of 30 newborn babies, 20 of them had
a body weight of less than 2500 grams. See Table 1.
<2500 20 66.67%
Total 30 100.00%
Experimental Control P
value
• 1/4 = seperempat