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Explanation text and passive voice
B. Tujuan Pembelajaran
Melalui tahapan pembelajaran model pembelajaran Active Learning, dengan metode diskusi
kelompok, tanya jawab, penugasan, peserta didik mampu:
1. Mengidentifikasi Bagian-bagian explanation text dengan teliti
2. Memahami text explanation dalam kehidupan sehari-hari dengan benar
3. Menyusun teks explanation dengan cermat
4. Mendemonstrasikan teks explanation dengan tepat dan dengan tanggung jawab
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Definition of Explanation Text
Explanation is a text which tells processes relating to forming of natural, social, scientific and
cultural phenomena. Explanation text is to say ‘why’ and ‘how’ of the forming of the phenomena. It
is often found in science, geography and history text books.
A text describing how a rain happens is best example of explanation text, image at commons.wikimedia.org
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Rain is the primary source of fresh water for most areas of the world, providing suitable conditions for
diverse ecosystems, as well as water for hydroelectric power plants and crop irrigation.
The phenomenon of rain is actually a water circle. The concept of the water cycle involves the sun
heating the Earth’s surface water and causing the surface water to evaporate. The water vapor rises into
the Earth’s atmosphere. The water in the atmosphere cools and condenses into liquid droplets. The
droplets grow until they are heavy and fall to the earth as precipitation which can be in the form of rain
or snow.
However, not all rain reaches the surface. Some evaporates while falling through dry air. This is called
virga, a phenomenon which is often seen in hot, dry desert regions.
Answering the question “why is daylight in summer longer than in winter?” is an example of explanation text
In the summer, the amount of daylight that we get is more than we get in winter. This is not because as
much people think we are closer to the sun but because of the tilt of the earth.
The earth is actually closer to the sun in winter than it is in summer but you would be forgiven for
thinking that this cannot be true after looking out of your window on a cold and frosty morning.
It seems strange that as the earth get closer to the sun during its orbit then the amount of daylight that
we get decrease. But that is the case. It is the tilt of the earth that determine the amount of daylight that
we get and so the length of time that for us the sun is above the horizon.
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1. Generic Structure Analysis on Explanation Text about Why Question
a. General statement; stating the phenomenon which daylight in summer is longer than in winter.
b. Explanation; it is the tilt of the earth that determines the amount of daylight not the distance of
the earth from the sun.
2. Language Feature Analysis on Explanation Text about Why Question
a. Focusing generic participant; daylight.
b. Using chronological connection; then, so, but.
c. Using passive voice; you would be forgiven.
d. Using present tense; the earth is actually closer to the sun.
Earthquake is one of the most destroying natural disasters. Unluckily it often happens in several regions.
Recently a horrible earthquake has shaken West Sumatra. It has brought great damages. Why did it
occur? Do you know how an earthquake happens?
Earthquakes are usually caused when rock underground suddenly breaks along a fault. This sudden
release of energy causes the seismic waves. It makes the ground shake. When two blocks of rock or two
plates are rubbing against each other, they stick a little. They don’t just slide smoothly. The rocks are
still pushing against each other, but not moving. After a while, the rocks break because of all the
pressure that’s built up. When the rocks break, the earthquake occurs.
During the earthquake and afterward, the plates or blocks of rock start moving, and they continue to
move until they get stuck again. The spot underground where the rock breaks is called the focus of the
earthquake. The place right above the focus is called the epicenter of the earthquake.
The text about how earthquake happens is mainly taken from: www.geo.mtu.edu/UPSeis/why.html
Generic Structure
1. General Statement:
Why did it occur? Do you know how an earthquake happens?
2. Sequenced Explanation:
Earthquakes are usually caused when rock underground suddenly breaks along a fault.
During the earthquake and afterward, the plates or blocks of rock start moving, and they continue
to move until they get stuck again.
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Text 4: Flood
General Statement:
Flooding is a natural phenomenon that usually happens in a lot of areas drained by the river flow. In
simple terms, it can be defined as the presence of flood water in a vast region that covers the area of the
earth’s surface.
Sequenced of explanations:
Flooding process itself occurs when the rains come and cause water sources such as rivers, seas, lakes,
and ditches no longer able to accommodate the water drop. The barren land covered with trees without
overflowing water will speed up the process of proficiency level, because the trees that should absorb the
water have been used as a furniture material. When the water source is no longer able to accommodate,
the water will overflow and flow into residential areas and have a big impact. Nowadays, flood is an
annually happening in some big cities in Indonesia, especially Jakarta.
Closing:
So, that’s the explanation of flood and how does it happen.
PASSIVE VOICE
Passive voice is a type of sentence or clause in which the subject receives the action of the verb
Pattern:
Subject + tobe (is/am/are) + Past Participle (PP)/V3
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EXAMPLE OF
TENSES PATTERN
O SENTENCES
Example:
NO ACTIVE PASSIVE
1 They called off the meeting The meeting was called off
2 His grandmother looked after him He was looked after by his grandmother
3 They will send him away to school He will be sent away to school